Melodic Mind

music amusing my muse's musings



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 6:39 PM
I like this. Why not haiku or senryu like the others?
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 6:47 PM
Breaks too many haiku/senryu rules. LOL Line xx
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