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Mellowed Exodus

The long day's closing
She sheds her soft robe, red, gold
As night blankets day

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/6/2010 5:46:00 PM

Great descriptive of a sunset..Glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for the comments on my work..I appreciate you stopping by my poems and my blog..Sara

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/10/2010 8:44:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Susan Palli

Date: 2/23/2010 10:10:00 AM

Lots of talent you have!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 4:24:00 AM

Sweet dreams! A restful, beauty in this haiku. Keep those images glowing. Smiles, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 2/19/2010 11:34:00 AM

Audrey, this is an exceptional Haiku >> James

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/18/2010 12:02:00 PM

Beautifukly descriptive piece. many congratulations on your sucess. REgards: Déirdre

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 7:15:00 AM

this is a really great poem, i loved the part about shedding her robe red gold, that sounded beautiful. congrats on your when in the seascape contest!!!!! =)jo

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/17/2010 11:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, dear Audrey! Well deserved. Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/16/2010 3:16:00 PM

very pretty Audrey. congrats on your fine poem here!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2010 1:03:00 PM

LOVE it, Audrey. Congratulations on your big win. Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey, on your 2nd place win in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku. I love the last line, "As night blankets day. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Audrey. Love,Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 2/16/2010 3:08:00 AM

Congrats on your success with this one Audrey.Rgds Brian

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/15/2010 7:49:00 PM

Congrats on placing 2nd in Raul's contest. Beautiful Haiku.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/15/2010 5:30:00 PM

I knew this would do well!!! Congratulations dear Audrey....so well deserved! :)

Marty Owens

Date: 2/15/2010 4:39:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey..Marty

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/15/2010 4:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in the contest Audrey, well done...Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 3:04:00 PM

Congrats Audrey on your 2nd place win in the Seascapes contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 2:16:00 PM

Audrey, congratulations on placing second in my contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2010 11:57:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Audrey. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/15/2010 8:20:00 AM

Oh wow!! I think this is the best I've read, Audrey!! What a unique, and outstanding twist on the contest....I love this!!~ Good luck! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/14/2010 7:15:00 PM

Oh I like this one Audrey.. such a sensuous Haiku .. at least I read it that way.. and your title is terrific.. luv.. and good luck if your contest entry.. Linda-Marie..

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