Mellow Noon

days of benign stealth
lawns, gardens, orchards drink to my health
the road's been unkind
well it's gone, it's flowed on behind

let me recline in this boon
mellow noon
the bell might ring
spiteful and soon

days of serene sloth
cirri bind the sky in strips of clean cloth
and they barely support its weight of light
and i circle my core like a moth

tell me whose darned flitting hand
lit this little burner just below my head
that it moves higher up with each sandbag shed
and i never knew how far my land spread

now i long for something to make
now i ache for something to wield
earthbound and sunbaked
like a worker in the field
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 9:52 AM
ADRIANA,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 18, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Adriana, enjoying and appreciating your moon poem once again ...Love SKAT
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January 12, 2016 at 2:34 PM
your poem is amazing, Adriana.... Enjoyed reading ... SKAT
Lane Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 10:25 PM
Adriana, nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Good write.....take care
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August 17, 2012 at 8:11 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning Adriana. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
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