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Mellow Noon

days of benign stealth lawns, gardens, orchards drink to my health the road's been unkind well it's gone, it's flowed on behind let me recline in this boon mellow noon the bell might ring spiteful and soon days of serene sloth cirri bind the sky in strips of clean cloth and they barely support its weight of light and i circle my core like a moth tell me whose darned flitting hand lit this little burner just below my head that it moves higher up with each sandbag shed and i never knew how far my land spread now i long for something to make now i ache for something to wield earthbound and sunbaked like a worker in the field

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2017 4:27:00 PM
Hi Adriana , nice to meet , beautiful descriptive and powerful your wording and connection puts me in the story very enjoyable thanks for sharing :))) hugs from Ireland
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:52:00 AM
ADRIANA,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/18/2016 12:06:00 PM
Adriana, enjoying and appreciating your moon poem once again ...Love SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2016 2:34:00 PM
your poem is amazing, Adriana.... Enjoyed reading ... SKAT
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Date: 8/17/2012 10:25:00 PM
Adriana, nice poem! Thanks for sharing! Good write.....take care
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:11:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning Adriana. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol
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