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Mellow Moon

near the close of day
violet sun's turned mellow
gold rose all aglow

then peach and plums swirl
whereas blue-green day left, spent
red creeps in, silent

clouds of antique rose
where has cream butterfly gone
fireflies on the lawn

marble moon appears
glowing in seas of colors
trills undercover

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Paula Goldsmith

May 30, 2024 at 12:07 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Mellow Moon" Haiku writes with a great/pretty picture. Have A Wonderful Day.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 30, 2024 at 8:51 PM

That is such wonderful news, Paula. Thanks For your kind thoughts. Blessings.

Sam Kauffman

May 24, 2024 at 10:47 AM

What a beautiful sunset dressed in every shade of twilight, Evelyn. I love the movement from sunset, to twilight to dusk to moonglow. What a wonderful image of the moon as a marble. This haiku string vibrates with serenity. So pretty. Blessings of serene twilights to you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 24, 2024 at 8:40 PM

I extend heartfelt thanks for the great pleasure of your kind observations, my friend. How nice to know you enjoyed this! Many blessings to you, as well.

Hilda Greenhough

May 23, 2024 at 9:00 PM

I like how the day ends and move to night with a marble moon.i felt the presence of this poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 24, 2024 at 8:25 PM

That is gladdening to know, Hilda. Thank you for the delight of your comment.

Vijay Pandit

May 23, 2024 at 4:34 AM

Beautiful images in realms of eve. I like how you depicted the changes as the day conveys final goodbye.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 23, 2024 at 1:17 PM

I'm extremely pleased that you've enjoyed this, Vijay. Thank you for the gladness your words bring. Blessings.

Ink Empress

May 23, 2024 at 3:38 AM

Glowing in seas of colors! How beautiful and soul warming is this artistic poem woven in such eloquence, your use of colors to paint imagery is beyond impressive! And the depth of what Youv delivered here is soulfully moving! Love it! How red creeps in and mellow moon youv described! Pleasure always reading your work: sending you light

Evelyn Judy Buehler

May 23, 2024 at 1:10 PM

I thank you for your insightful, kind response, dear Ink. What a thrill to know you enjoyed the poem's hues! Your lovely words are very well received. Blessings.

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