Mellow Moon

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near the close of day violet sun's turned mellow gold rose all aglow then peach and plums swirl whereas blue-green day left, spent red creeps in, silent clouds of antique rose where has cream butterfly gone fireflies on the lawn marble moon appears glowing in seas of colors trills undercover

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2024 12:07:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "Mellow Moon" Haiku writes with a great/pretty picture. Have A Wonderful Day.....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/30/2024 8:51:00 PM

That is such wonderful news, Paula. Thanks For your kind thoughts. Blessings.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/24/2024 10:47:00 AM

What a beautiful sunset dressed in every shade of twilight, Evelyn. I love the movement from sunset, to twilight to dusk to moonglow. What a wonderful image of the moon as a marble. This haiku string vibrates with serenity. So pretty. Blessings of serene twilights to you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/24/2024 8:40:00 PM

I extend heartfelt thanks for the great pleasure of your kind observations, my friend. How nice to know you enjoyed this! Many blessings to you, as well.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/23/2024 9:00:00 PM

I like how the day ends and move to night with a marble moon.i felt the presence of this poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/24/2024 8:25:00 PM

That is gladdening to know, Hilda. Thank you for the delight of your comment.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/23/2024 4:34:00 AM

Beautiful images in realms of eve. I like how you depicted the changes as the day conveys final goodbye.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/23/2024 1:17:00 PM

I'm extremely pleased that you've enjoyed this, Vijay. Thank you for the gladness your words bring. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/23/2024 3:38:00 AM

Glowing in seas of colors! How beautiful and soul warming is this artistic poem woven in such eloquence, your use of colors to paint imagery is beyond impressive! And the depth of what Youv delivered here is soulfully moving! Love it! How red creeps in and mellow moon youv described! Pleasure always reading your work: sending you light

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/23/2024 1:10:00 PM

I thank you for your insightful, kind response, dear Ink. What a thrill to know you enjoyed the poem's hues! Your lovely words are very well received. Blessings.