Mellow

as the sun goes down 
the sky bursting bright colors
I become mellow 
nature shows perfect splendor
beauty rears amid chaos
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 22, 2015 at 1:59 PM
BETTY, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
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March 21, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Congrats for your win in my contest. I did not see anything of chaos in this one. Just beautiful bursting colors to make you mellow.
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