Mellifluous

His
flute tune
harmonic
flowing gently
melting every soul in ocean of love ~
Enthralled, her deep eyes closing, mind floating 
and dissolving
in its soft
rhythmic
charm



This is inspired by the story of Hindu God Lord Krishna and Goddess Radharani..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 1:09 AM
I came to check your picture. YES, this is the cute picture of you I thought was you!!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 3:07 AM
Oh.. my my... Thank you so much dear Andrea. What a sweet angel you are... Love and hugs.. :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 3:12 PM
This piece urges me to listen to the music he creates with his enchanting flute, Anitha!!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 2:34 AM
Thank you so much Newton. Have a great day :)
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 4:02 AM
I can see the scene and feel his emotion as he played his flute. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Jayasankar Avatar
December 18, 2020 at 2:33 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and your valuable comment Sara.. Hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 4:04 PM
this is so soothing and beautiful!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 1:38 AM
Thank you so much Andrea for your valuable comment. Just love your sweet character.. with lots of respect.. Hugs ~ Ani
Balasubramanian Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:10 AM
Wow! Beautifully captured. Take care Rama
Jayasankar Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Thank you so much Rama... How are you? You too take care and have a sweet lovely evening dear friend.. Hugs :)
Downing  Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 10:03 PM
Ahh, I’m in love :)
Jayasankar Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 2:21 AM
Thank you dear Akkina for the visit and your sweet comment. Have a lovely day.. hugs :)
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 5:41 PM
This is very peaceful. I enjoyed this :)
Jayasankar Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 4:31 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Heidi Sands.. Have a blessed day :)
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:16 PM
- A wonderful poem, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 4:30 AM
Thank you so much Anne.. Hope you are enjoying Christmas time.. Have a lovely day dear... Hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Your sweet words sound like music. They make me so happy tonight. Thank you Ani! ~ Melodies and Magic, Gershon
Jayasankar Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Thank you so much Gershon. Have a blessed day :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 9:00 AM
Such a precious poem, almost singing to love. ~~
Jayasankar Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Have a blessed day :)
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