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Mele Melee!

Wind rushes downhill Tearing into the orchard Apples ev'rywhere!

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Raul Moreno

Date: 12/17/2008 4:58:00 PM

Nice haiku Nigel. I like haiku's...Raul

Daver Austin

Date: 11/24/2008 3:44:00 PM

Hey, Nigel, let's make a pie. This haiku presents an irresistibe image. Love, daver

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/24/2008 11:58:00 AM

Perfect format ..... And who said " don't upset the apple-cart " ???? ....Rgds. Granny Smith ...Write onnnnnnnn , Nigel ...

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/24/2008 6:27:00 AM

Super title! Vivid imagery... perfect construction! Well done Nigel!! Best wishes, Keith

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/24/2008 6:19:00 AM

Such a vivid picture you paint with this haiku! Along with that rush of wind, we can feel it and are there! Excellent! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/24/2008 3:04:00 AM

Sounds like home to me. :) We have apples willy nilly all over VT right now! a tasty haiku. :) Love Kristin

Jim Wilson

Date: 11/23/2008 7:16:00 PM

The mood of this haiku changes for me; it's a compex mix of storm and cheer. Thanks.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/23/2008 3:45:00 PM

Two weekend ago, we were in the foothills, in an area called Apple Hill. And yes....the wind blew the apples off the trees, and there were apples ev'rywhere!! But it sure did smell good! Love your haiku, Nigel!! A nice fall feeling to it! ~ Carrie

Juliane Thomas

Date: 11/23/2008 2:42:00 PM

As you may have noticed, haiku is one of my favorite forms of poetry. Wind is one of my favorite elements (second only to rain), and this haiku describes it so well. I love the image of "apples ev'rywhere"!