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Another of my Haibun FreeStyle pieces.

 

Thank you Debbie Guzzi for questioning my original title, and its meaning to this poem. I think I may have clung to it for sentimental reasons. I hope the new title makes more sense.

Where the sun beats on dry cracking plains like an anvil. Where Winter’s frozen fingers strangle growth. Where sweaty shirts cling to mortal skin. Where humanity stands on a deserted beach, or waits in a crowded queue; that’s where we live. Savour the moment Hungrily consume essence Let flavours explode Biting Life’s experience Expires quicker in sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/20/2017 5:09:00 PM
Very nicely done, I try to stay out of the sun 7 :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 8:38:00 AM
Oh its all there, Scott, such interesting poetry Scott love this..
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Date: 7/27/2016 5:28:00 PM
Deep and well written haibun, Scott. I've never attempted this form...looks intriguing
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Date: 7/18/2016 7:31:00 AM
I am not all that familiar with the form Scott but I like the effect with this piece. Thanks for visiting my Story Teller poem.
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Date: 7/14/2016 12:52:00 PM
Celebration of poetic mastery dear, Scott! Excellent writing no matter where you are!
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Date: 7/13/2016 5:03:00 PM
So are you living in either place right now? I like this.
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:46:00 PM
Expand on this Scott is one part Bali & 1 part Thailand?
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Date: 7/12/2016 8:03:00 PM
Did you go to Bali Scott? Light & Love
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:49:00 AM
Such a Wonderful Haibun my dear friend, scott. A 7. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks you so much as well for visiting my poem. More blessings! love and hugs, Galeo
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