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Melanie Departed

MELANIE DEPARTED

Melanie departed. His habits cured her of moon-shine and bambi-eyes. The huge door slammed so tight and her deep footprints in the mud that night made it intelligible to even him that she never would return. This crystal clear taunt was haunting. A spectral of fear hung like a teardrop chandelier, ready to loose a torrent of vacuous time….tick tick tick

tHe raFTers dark and eerIE
      CrEak
the cyclone in his head wh-O-rls
         and the O-cean of his stomach drops
a ghost’s in flight
  its chAIns
they claNG against the treMblinG Ceiling
portenTIOUS stars where light shouLd shiNe
      a shadow stuns, IT PeeKS 
at him, smiling so vaingl-O-riously 
  he faints

as he revives
  he opens up his eyes
     a green sheet with holes for eyes, speaks

“b..o..o”

      he loses his booze
   runs from that O-pen space
the chains they r U m B l e

   the apparition gives it straight,

“your d...e...a...d fool”

8/5/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/10/2019 6:14:00 PM
Loved the ending. Loved the poem.
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Date: 8/6/2019 1:35:00 PM
Fantastic! Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2019 1:47:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Date: 8/6/2019 8:25:00 AM
E e e e R i e e but fun ! Inventive and witty dearest, Kim. Enjoyed it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/6/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for reading, dear friend!

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