Melanie Departed

MELANIE DEPARTED

Melanie departed. His habits cured her of moon-shine and bambi-eyes. The huge door slammed so tight and her deep footprints in the mud that night made it intelligible to even him that she never would return. This crystal clear taunt was haunting. A spectral of fear hung like a teardrop chandelier, ready to loose a torrent of vacuous time….tick tick tick

tHe raFTers dark and eerIE
      CrEak
the cyclone in his head wh-O-rls
         and the O-cean of his stomach drops
a ghost’s in flight
  its chAIns
they claNG against the treMblinG Ceiling
portenTIOUS stars where light shouLd shiNe
      a shadow stuns, IT PeeKS 
at him, smiling so vaingl-O-riously 
  he faints

as he revives
  he opens up his eyes
     a green sheet with holes for eyes, speaks

“b..o..o”

      he loses his booze
   runs from that O-pen space
the chains they r U m B l e

   the apparition gives it straight,

“your d...e...a...d fool”

8/5/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Loved the ending. Loved the poem.
Romios Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:35 PM
Fantastic! Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Thank you, Panagiota!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 8:25 AM
E e e e R i e e but fun ! Inventive and witty dearest, Kim. Enjoyed it!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Thanks for reading, dear friend!
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