Melancholy

Without a warming
Suddenly knocks at your door
Opaquing the soul
Debilitating spirit
Fighted with praying and will












Example For Melancholy Poetry Contest
September 24, 2016

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Date: 9/25/2016 12:24:00 PM
Melancholy in a nice Tanka ...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/25/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Probir
Date: 9/24/2016 6:36:00 PM
Dear Nayda, perfect Tanka form with a sad message. Best wishes in the contest. Betty
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/25/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thank you Betty. This poem is an example for my contest called Melancholy.
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