Melancholy

Without a warming
Suddenly knocks at your door
Opaquing the soul
Debilitating spirit
Fighted with praying and will












Example For Melancholy Poetry Contest
September 24, 2016
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Gupta Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Melancholy in a nice Tanka ...
Negron Flores Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Thank you Probir
Janko Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Dear Nayda, perfect Tanka form with a sad message. Best wishes in the contest. Betty
Negron Flores Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Thank you Betty. This poem is an example for my contest called Melancholy.
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