Melancholy

Melancholy
	
	rainy season 
	grief, white hydrangeas 
	hungry caterpillar


	A haikuette for “Haiku Wannabees”

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Debbie Duncan

August 5, 2013 at 5:04 PM

this I really like on nature, did you know monarchs sleep for " 5" months ,I learned that on Andrea post a few days ago ;} Oh, very nice win too;}

Jack Jordan

August 5, 2013 at 6:07 PM

Thanks, Debbie. No, I didn't know about monarchs. Thanks for the info, and you too Andrea... Jack

Barbara Gorelick

June 11, 2013 at 6:46 PM

Sure like this one. congrats on your win..BG

Jack Jordan

June 11, 2013 at 8:59 PM

Thank you, Barbara... Jack

Connie Gildersleeve

June 11, 2013 at 6:40 PM

I enjoyed this image Jack. Congratulations on your win. on nice

Jack Jordan

June 11, 2013 at 8:57 PM

Thank you, Connie... Jack

Debbie Guzzi

June 11, 2013 at 4:02 PM

Nicely done evocative verse. Congrad's Light & Love

Jack Jordan

June 11, 2013 at 6:22 PM

Thank you, Debbie. I enjoyed entering the contest... Jack

Karen Anglesey

June 10, 2013 at 7:05 PM

The imagery is so large in such a small poem. Nice vision of nature :)

Jack Jordan

June 10, 2013 at 7:13 PM

Thanks, Karen. I appreciate the comment... Jack

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