Melancholy

Melancholy rainy season grief, white hydrangeas hungry caterpillar A haikuette for “Haiku Wannabees”

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Date: 8/5/2013 5:04:00 PM

this I really like on nature, did you know monarchs sleep for " 5" months ,I learned that on Andrea post a few days ago ;} Oh, very nice win too;}

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/5/2013 6:07:00 PM

Thanks, Debbie. No, I didn't know about monarchs. Thanks for the info, and you too Andrea... Jack

Date: 6/11/2013 6:46:00 PM

Sure like this one. congrats on your win..BG

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/11/2013 8:59:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara... Jack

Date: 6/11/2013 6:40:00 PM

I enjoyed this image Jack. Congratulations on your win. on nice

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/11/2013 8:57:00 PM

Thank you, Connie... Jack

Date: 6/11/2013 4:02:00 PM

Nicely done evocative verse. Congrad's Light & Love

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/11/2013 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie. I enjoyed entering the contest... Jack

Date: 6/10/2013 7:05:00 PM

The imagery is so large in such a small poem. Nice vision of nature :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 6/10/2013 7:13:00 PM

Thanks, Karen. I appreciate the comment... Jack