Melancholy

enveloped by darkness, from a surge of sadness
my emotions drop away to this darker realm
where I find a swirling madness of gloom
and the depth of somber is found

I become a broken twisted world
where my mind retreats
and flees from life's shattered shards
whose sharp edges cut the tendrils of illusion
leaving nothing but silence
that holds me a captive, numb to this space
so dark, so quiet

where I begin to understand
what foreboding feels like

5/7/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Y. Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:18 PM
WoW! Frederic, Congratulations on your well-written, dark, hopeless, and melancholy write.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 6:25 AM
Excellent, Frederick! Congratulations! ... whose sharp edges cut the tendrils of illusion leaving nothing but silence
Alex Avatar
May 14, 2023 at 7:40 PM
"I become a broken twisted world where my mind retreats and flees from life's shattered shards" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Interesting work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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