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Melancholy

enveloped by darkness, from a surge of sadness my emotions drop away to this darker realm where I find a swirling madness of gloom and the depth of somber is found I become a broken twisted world where my mind retreats and flees from life's shattered shards whose sharp edges cut the tendrils of illusion leaving nothing but silence that holds me a captive, numb to this space so dark, so quiet where I begin to understand what foreboding feels like 5/7/23

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Date: 5/19/2023 4:18:00 PM
WoW! Frederic, Congratulations on your well-written, dark, hopeless, and melancholy write.
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Date: 5/15/2023 6:25:00 AM
Excellent, Frederick! Congratulations! ... whose sharp edges cut the tendrils of illusion leaving nothing but silence
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Date: 5/14/2023 7:40:00 PM
"I become a broken twisted world where my mind retreats and flees from life's shattered shards" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/11/2023 1:09:00 PM
Interesting work you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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