Melancholy

I feel melancholy today, October has turned damp and cool. And the sky dons a veil of grey; while the children head off to school trekking through mud and piles of crud. Slumped, on this wet, depressing day, a scarecrow stands out like a fool. And I fear Winter's on its way as dead leaves fill my empty pool; falling from trees, stripped with each breeze.
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Kauffman Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 11:30 AM
The flip side of autumn joy is the pensive spirit it brings to the surface. Summer has left and we know winter approaches. Autumn is definitely transition - "tween" season. So nicely expressed Emile. Sending you a :)" to brighten your day, blessings for your melancholy heart and congratulations.
Pinet Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Sam, after reading your comment, I do feel less melancholy my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my M contest with this wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Pinet Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 11:03 AM
And big congrats on the win!
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 11:03 AM
autumn gets me this way too, Emile. Love your depiction of that autumnal melancholy.
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Thanks, Andrea, fall is a transition period and near the end, it gets pretty messy my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 9:36 PM
Wonderful images of a "melancholy" sort of day. Nicely-written, Emile. I really enjoyed it, but I've been under the influence of pain pills all day. Had a tooth pulled and it is hurting where no tooth is. Can you beat that? Good poem for the contest. Best wishes.
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Thanks, Milt, I hope you are feeling better soon, I know how much pain a toothache can bring my friend, Emile.
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