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Meet You In Our Dreams

lips softly kiss your temple finding the gentle pulse of your heart... I never felt closer to you as I do at this moment,deep emotions swell in my chest,never imagined I could kiss your beating heart... It's rhythmic beat brought a calmness as I breathe you in... your skin and hair smell of tropical sweetness...you told me that you loved coconuts because they smell like me...now I understand what you meant..you snuggle closer, kissing me as you nuzzle into my neck.. breathing a deep calm "You still awake babe?" You ask "Uh huh...meet you in our dreams!" I whisper you mumble something inaudible kissing my neck once more...... the warmth of your breath caressing my flesh sending a chill through me.... If I died tonight I would die satisfied because right here, right now I felt a complete euphoria I never felt before.... soft bodies, pulsating hearts, warm breath... I felt at peace as my eyes droop heavy and my lashes kiss my cheeks..... we lay breathing each others warmth as our souls melt into one...one breath, one heart, one dream....... smiling I softly sigh floating to meet you in our dreams...

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/30/2019 3:45:00 PM

Superbly stunning Brenda, real passion filled with such sensuality makes the heart race to the top of the stairs and back. Real great imagery with such insightfulness, Beautiful penning my blessed one! Have a great weekend, Poetry hugs, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/31/2019 12:39:00 PM

Ah Gordon thank you so very much! I really appreciated your friendship!;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/30/2019 10:24:00 AM

I must admit I too am enamoured by the smell of coconut. I so enjoyed this passionate write. This is ooh la la all the way. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 11:32:00 AM

Rick lol thank you my friend! Glad you. Could relate to it even if just the smell of coconut! You are too kind!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/30/2019 8:04:00 AM

this is gorgeous...i am in awe, my muse rarely pens romance so i truly admire the beauty in the folds of romantic poems... love this one :) hugs

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 8:10:00 AM

Sandy thank you so very much! Now I have read several of your poems and they are truly beautiful! I really appreciate the read and warm comment!;)

Chris Green

Date: 8/30/2019 7:30:00 AM

This was absolutely beautiful. Your talent shines in this wonderful poem.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 8:09:00 AM

Aha thank you so much Chris! That means a lot! I guess I put a bit of my emotions into it! But I appreciate it very much!;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/30/2019 12:55:00 AM

Brenda, A very nice poem. It has warmth. A tropical coconut warmth. "If I died tonight I would die satisfied because right here, right now I felt a complete euphoria". Oh yes, yes indeed, -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 3:24:00 AM

Lol I am so glad you enjoyed it Richard! ;) knowing one appreciates my writing makes worth the trouble of digging deep into my emotions to write like this! You are far too kind!;)Thank you so much!;)