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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Meet me in my dreams, if only for tonight... I unwind as I draw you in, things finally feel right. A tranquil breeze on carefree seas; a second wind - take flight! Meet me in the air, we’ll merge and spiral out of sight! Remember with me fearless days - we rode out every tide; jumped back into the surf as tangled bodies would collide. We frolicked amidst sand and foam, no prompting foolish pride, and freely fell into each other, stronger side by side. No doubt unfurled its flag in fear of all the beauty there; no rage stormed on out of control, no orchestra of tears. The music played, though, soft and sweet, a tune pure hearts could hear, as if a melody for Him upon a midnight clear. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/1/2021 5:06:00 AM

Indeed the music plays soft and sweet--a tune pure hearts do hear! A joy to read again my friend.

Hello There
Date: 6/2/2021 5:24:00 PM

What a sweet surprise, Vijay! Thank you so much for taking the time to revisit this piece and leave kind words of support <3

Valerie Staton

Date: 10/18/2019 8:33:00 AM

Wonderful imagery. I enjoyed reading your work. God bless you and keep you.

Hello There
Date: 10/18/2019 12:08:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Valerie ~ happy you stopped by and enjoyed this piece :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2019 6:12:00 PM

Hello There,this would be the p;ace i would like to meet my special someone. it sounds so beautiful. i would like to be by the waterside with a special someone by my side. Have a nice evening my friend.

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 10:15:00 PM

Aww, thank you for sharing this special wish, Darlene ~ I hope it will come true for you <3 Enjoy your evening!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/16/2019 8:34:00 AM

A meeting of the mind. What a fabulous destination. Blessings Rick.

Hello There
Date: 10/16/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you, Richard :) hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/15/2019 6:40:00 PM

well you knew i would love this one my friend...the beach, the ocean...just beautiful like that tranquil breeze, this one is sensual, soft and simply gorgeous poetry :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 10/15/2019 6:43:00 PM

Lol. I didn't know, but I am so glad you did :) Thank you so much, Sandra <3 hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2019 4:48:00 PM

A beautiful poem to match the beautiful photo, HT.. a romantic scene takes place in your vision there--where you meet in soft and sweet music of two hearts..so well written!

Hello There
Date: 10/15/2019 6:24:00 PM

A pleasure to read your poetic comments, my friend ~ thank you so very much!!

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2019 3:43:00 PM

This was gorgeous. I could feel this. The movement of your lines combined with the melody of the sea create a soft dancing tempo to your poem. Just an absolutely beautiful and flawless poem. Your talent shines brightly my friend. I was waiting for something new from you.

Hello There
Date: 10/15/2019 4:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris, for your thoughtful and generous comments ~ I always look forward to your feedback :)