Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Meet Me In the Middle

Meet me in the middle. Is this how love dies?
You’re changing. Why can’t you compromise?
Things used to be so easy.
What happened, sweetie?
You could find
me
on your mind
if you’d let things be
how they were naturally!
Let love shine again from your blue eyes.
Meet me in the middle. Is this how love dies?

Nov. 19, 2018 for Emile Pinet's Andaree Poem Poetry Contest

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Kurt Ravidas May 30, 2019 at 11:28 AM Sweet poets, is this a way to treat my envy? It blew up right in the middle! Oh, this form! I never would have thought of it. I think I'll go and have a bit of a cry.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 1, 2018 at 10:33 AM Beautiful truth inked w/such grace appeal, Andrea!! This poem shines aurora heart brightly. An instant classic, and a personal fave for sure. Love it! Keep the love and knowledge flowing. Love and joy always.

Mystic Rose Rose November 20, 2018 at 4:39 PM I guess it dies when two people stop trying. Nice form and content Andrea, winning wishes for you. Hope all is well, peace xo

Constance La France November 20, 2018 at 4:27 PM Andrea, I love your poem and of course it is wonderful as it is your invented form, well done ~

Connie Marcum Wong November 20, 2018 at 4:05 PM It is wonderful that Emile is featuring your lovely Andaree form in his contest Andrea. I am sure he will like this one, knowing his romantic soul. It is a great entry for the contest my friend! : )xxoo

Jim Joyce November 20, 2018 at 3:58 PM nicely done and very clever indeed

Judy Ball November 20, 2018 at 3:47 PM Well Done Andrea. All to often two people will refuse to meet in the middle and to agree to disagree or accept the other's view. It's hurtful and yes, that's the way love dies. When respect dies so does love. Good job. God Bless, JB

John Castro November 20, 2018 at 2:50 AM Mrs Andrea i see youre still at it strong lol nice to see some old poets still here writing :) 7up Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2018 at 12:19 PM yeah, when I drop dead, you will see the end of my posts!!

Becca Teagan November 19, 2018 at 10:34 PM Cool! and well done!

Sara Kendrick November 19, 2018 at 5:14 PM Reads like a great contender. Fan the flame it will rekindle the love fires. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Harry Horsman November 19, 2018 at 4:29 PM Wow, love this Andrea, certain i once wrote a poem, in this shape..

Line Gauthier November 19, 2018 at 1:42 PM Very touching, Andrea. Well done.

Jan Allison November 19, 2018 at 1:21 PM compromise is key to a couple being contented Andrea, think your poem has hit the nail on the head as to how relationships fail:-( hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues November 19, 2018 at 11:20 AM Nice contender!!

Vijay Pandit November 19, 2018 at 11:04 AM Who can do better in this form than the one who invented it. Great message in your poem, Andrea. A win for you for sure. Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2018 at 12:20 PM I am sure others can come up with something better than this, Vijay, and I am eager to see Emile's picks. I hope just to make it even at the bottom of the list!

John Michaels November 19, 2018 at 10:53 AM Really interesting form; not seen this one before and now I know why... Emile's contest page says it was invented by you. Impressive! Most impressive! Good luck. Regards, John.

Tom Cunningham November 19, 2018 at 10:12 AM Give and take is important in any relationship.Well written Andrea. Tom.

Chris Green November 19, 2018 at 9:40 AM Beautifully done Andrea. Most relationships work out much better if both parties meet somewhere in the middle. Best of luck in the contest