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Written: November 07, 2025, for contest sponsored by Graig Cornish

Medium Rare

 “What’s it all about, Alfie?”—  
Are they hedonistic choices—and the katabatic void they leave?  
This cup’s clutter, this timetable of supplejack sighs.  
If the moon forgets—will it ever call us back?  
   
Are we meant to have beyond what we bestow?  
Or are we required to be seraphim?  
We chase glitter, blind to its lamplight and oil.  
 
Alfie, if a fool shows no interest,  
Is revenge the clever answer?  
And if life belongs only to the strong—  
What’s your wager on the sphinx’s ancient rule?  
 
Our aspirations fold like creased napkins—  
still clean enough for an evasive guest.  
  
Love? A leftover coat on the wrong hook,  
a name spoken softly, reshaped when no one listens.  
   
Hope? A medium-rare object—  
warm in the middle, a blush of pink.  
Never raw, though.  
  
And relevance? The hum between two clashing chords—
your laughter mocking silence.
“What’s it all about, Alfie?” then…
Perhaps nothing.
Perhaps everything.
Or simply this:
You hesitate—and maybe that’s the answer.
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Miller Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:48 AM
A tempting, contemplative bite: warm at the center, never fully raw, and always just beyond reach, congratulations
Beaufort Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 11:46 AM
SP, a lot of questions to answer for sure. Funny how as we age the answers to these questions seem to appear before our eyes. At least if we hesitate, we might not jump to conclusions without chewing on the facts. Hope you are well and smiles, of course!!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 2:06 AM
I tried to find out what this contest is all about, but I failed; it's definitely not about a steak. A deep poem with contrasts of old and new.
Rolland Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:05 PM
very clever poem, and so interesting for reading, poem i will remember, thanks poet Sotto
Hind Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 10:57 PM
This is deep, full of depth. I was thinking similar in my writing this evening. Worthy of many reads
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