Meditation

Meditation sweeps my thoughts away
Be at peace to face them another day
Floating away like clouds in the sky
I smile as my minds waves goodbye

Colours of rainbow flow
Across my eyes & through my soul
Eyes focused on colours, shades and shapes
My private northern lights on display

No thoughts on time and place
Senses smooth to a slower pace
The bubble around is now still
With positive energy it is now filled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Foss Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 11:56 AM
I saw your request for feedback on the wall. Your Poems good, well, I like it! I'm new here, just posted my first and it was on meditation as well. Namaste. ~Ben
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June 21, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Thank you! will look yours up, was a bit anxious on putting it on display, even took me a while to retrieve the comment( yours! But got it finally :-))
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