Mediocre

My love is greater
Than her petty attitude
On mediocre

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Brian Strand's "ONE FROM YOUR ANTHOLOGY" contest

2/11/2012

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Don Johnson

February 11, 2012 at 8:04 PM

loss of gratitude, but women want to be right:)

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

February 11, 2012 at 2:11 PM

Wow Russ-this is powerful! Nicely done :) Thanks so much for my placement in your contest and for your nice comments. Have a great weekend!

Sara Kendrick

February 11, 2012 at 1:18 PM

Good luck in Brian's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your reviews of my work are so uplifting..May your gift overflow onto the pages of soup..Sara

Chuck Novotny

February 11, 2012 at 12:44 AM

Well said. I love the brevity too ~ Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

February 11, 2012 at 12:08 AM

Hi, Russell. nice to see you here tonight. It certainly is petty to not want a love beyond mediocrity!!

Nette Onclaud

February 10, 2012 at 11:37 PM

sensitive way to express the depth of love, russell.. stunning piece with winning huggs!.. so delightful! ... thanks for my win in your comma contest; i had fun!..:)

Robert Pettit

February 10, 2012 at 10:49 PM

Good senryu Russell.

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