Mediocre

My love is greater Than her petty attitude On mediocre Russell Sivey Entrant into Brian Strand's "ONE FROM YOUR ANTHOLOGY" contest 2/11/2012

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Don Johnson

Date: 2/11/2012 8:04:00 PM

loss of gratitude, but women want to be right:)

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 2/11/2012 2:11:00 PM

Wow Russ-this is powerful! Nicely done :) Thanks so much for my placement in your contest and for your nice comments. Have a great weekend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2012 1:18:00 PM

Good luck in Brian's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Your reviews of my work are so uplifting..May your gift overflow onto the pages of soup..Sara

Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/11/2012 12:44:00 AM

Well said. I love the brevity too ~ Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2012 12:08:00 AM

Hi, Russell. nice to see you here tonight. It certainly is petty to not want a love beyond mediocrity!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2012 11:37:00 PM

sensitive way to express the depth of love, russell.. stunning piece with winning huggs!.. so delightful! ... thanks for my win in your comma contest; i had fun!..:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/10/2012 10:49:00 PM

Good senryu Russell.