Meanwhile Back At the Ranch

Visibility's dropped to near-zero
   Thermometer's plummeting too
Ocean tempest tossing and turning
   Spraying the nerves of the crew

Deck swabbed by torrential rain
   Passengers hunkered down below
Afternoon's slipped into deep shadows
   Danger's pulse glowers and grows...

Back on shore, weather's sunny
   Gentle breezes, calm and warm
Ignorance is sheerest bliss
   When it comes to cruel ocean storms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bush Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Got a little seasick. Great imagery, Gershon. I'll stick to the rocky shore.
Wolf Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Rocky shore --- Sylvester Stallone will meet you at the 3rd boulder by the pier.
Adams Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 7:44 PM
when I lived in jersey I had heard lots of stories of ocean's storms from the scallop boat crew...I will stay on dry land... wonderful penning my friend... hugs
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:10 PM
Terra firm won't make you squirm! ~ Admiral Halsey
Krutsinger Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 11:23 AM
You make it sound real, not as delightful as the brochures.
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:08 PM
Well, those brochures are real too ---- real misleading! Thanks, Caren. ~ Gershon
Somadas Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 1:43 AM
Ignorance is sheerest bliss.. When it comes to cruel ocean storms... Great statement.. Have a nice day Gershon..
Wolf Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 8:07 PM
No danger at all! ~ Voice of Ignorance
Cunningham Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:52 PM
When there's a raging storm at sea give me terra firma anytime. Tom
Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:27 PM
And when there's a storm on land?... Thanks, Tom. Best always, Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, oh yes, oceans storms can be rough on the water. Tis is so true. Have a nice day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Thank you for your comment and viewpoint, Darlene. All the best, Gershon
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