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Meanwhile

bamboo windchimes dance a tune
loose components swaying gently in the breeze
damselfly still looking for mate



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2025

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2018 at 11:18 AM

oh wow. this one is awesome

June 16, 2018 at 1:34 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

June 15, 2018 at 10:08 PM

Captivating and vivid imagery Line. A great haiku! warmest wishes.. ~Susan

June 16, 2018 at 12:02 AM

Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 15, 2018 at 9:50 AM

Beautiful haiku with the "aha" moment at the end! Love it! Pandita

June 15, 2018 at 7:10 PM

Aha indeed. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Pandita.

June 15, 2018 at 6:07 AM

Perfect Line! Great Haiku :)

June 15, 2018 at 7:39 AM

Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated.

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