Meaningless Rhymes-5

Stumbling through existence
having passive days and active nights
your happiness a facade 
contemplate promises were made 
wonder are they kept safe
but past is a cloud of haze
don't look any further don't turn your face
it was dawn when i met u it'll be dusk when we call it a day.
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May 12, 2022 at 11:53 PM
I'm reminded of David Bowie's method of writing some of his songs: he wrote down sentences on paper then tore each sentence from the paper and mixed them up to form a song. I really enjoyed reading this. Cheers - Gary
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May 15, 2022 at 10:12 PM
Appreciate it Gary.
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April 9, 2022 at 8:59 AM
As with anything, meaning is in the mind of the beholder. Enjoyed this. xomo
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May 15, 2022 at 10:14 PM
Thank you Maureen .
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