Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Meaning of Real Love

When  our  world bequeaths its laughter and at times , agony..,

Two hearts' constant devotion endures  all of life’s seasons

Relishing  an imperfectly perfect being, as is--

For through kindness quite god-like, love abides …without question.



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Written 8/08/2018
A four line poem on what is love: For Faraz Ajmal
14 syls per line checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Susan Gentry August 11, 2018 at 2:38 PM Congratulations on your win. Well said!

Winged Warrior August 10, 2018 at 12:54 AM Back to congrats!!! my friend on your great win...love & light...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden August 9, 2018 at 8:47 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Nette - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Sandra Haight August 9, 2018 at 7:13 PM Beautifully expressed, Nette. Love "endures all of life's seasons"...how true. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

L. J. Carber August 9, 2018 at 9:09 AM This is really fine! A number one in my book, Nette-- truly lovely, in every sense of the word.

Charles Messina August 9, 2018 at 6:38 AM A perfect description of the meaning of love. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Well deserved, Nette! Huggs // Charlie

Connie Marcum Wong August 8, 2018 at 2:48 PM All of life's seasons...so beautifully expressed Nette. Congratulations on your second placement! : )

Faraz Ajmal August 8, 2018 at 12:56 PM Your poem is really beautiful with great lines and I absolutely love reading it, many congratulations on your 2nd position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Phyllis Babcock August 8, 2018 at 11:51 AM Well written well said on the endurance of true love. love phyl

Charlie Smith August 8, 2018 at 10:26 AM Perfectly defined My Dear, best wishes...

Winged Warrior August 8, 2018 at 7:04 AM Tis, real love and real poetry....what else do you need...love & light...^WW^

Gary Bateman August 8, 2018 at 4:43 AM Hello Dear Nette!! Very beautiful and most excellent is your view and description of the meaning of real love. Excellent Verse!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Mystic Rose Rose August 7, 2018 at 4:24 PM Love always abides in the lives of those who love unconditionally with a heart ajar. Your four lines are exquisite Nette. No better way to place it, gl in the contest, and thanks for sharing Have a wonderful evening.

Gary Smith August 7, 2018 at 4:18 PM Beautiful lines Nette :)

Vijay Pandit August 7, 2018 at 3:25 PM You defined love well, nette..

Tom Cunningham August 7, 2018 at 2:46 PM Lovely verse on what love is Nette. Good luck. Tom