Meadow Abloom

lush green meadow
abloom with white daisies --
a raindrop falls

3/1/12 Kim Merryman
Entered in PD's "Your Own Favorite Haiku" Contest
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Richards Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 9:30 AM
I love the beautiful picture this paints!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:28 AM
Hi congratulations, great haiku Kim , and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:10 PM
Kim,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 12:30 PM
so charming soon we will see those fields of daisies! Congrad's on your win!
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Kim. Love,Carol
Arowolo Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 5:58 PM
Fine write,Wonderful imagery,Kim.Congratulations on your well deserved win in Charles`s contest....
Poet Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:32 PM
Very good imagery here Kim.Congrats on your big win.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:16 PM
Congrats on your great win, Kim! I remember this one...I loved it the first time I read it. Blesiings, Rhonda
Onclaud Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 9:28 AM
you make my imagination twirl.. congrats to you, kim! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations Kim, a lovely piece xx
Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 1:05 AM
congrats Kim on a wonderful win for words of perfection for Hailu contest by Charles..luv..
Horsman Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 4:32 AM
Love this Kim, and depending where one resides, one needs that raindrop. harry
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:11 AM
Great work..Enjoyed picturing the meadow from the words penned..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Ahh! My butterfly was actually yellow and I think that it was a Swallowtail which we do not see so much around here..Yellow would not fit in what I wanted to say so I used blue which is a color I enjoy...Sara
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March 5, 2012 at 6:34 PM
Such lovely images from your Haiku Kim , best wishes , Declan xx
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March 5, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Very beautiful poem, Kim. I am no haiku expert, but I know when I find a poem I love. Your imagery is wonderful, Kim. Winning wishes for you in th haiku contest! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:19 PM
Nothing more pretty than a meadow in bloom Kim. Your words capture such a meadow :)
Novotny Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:43 AM
You make it seem so easy, but I know that it takes genuine clarity to write with such elegant simplicity. And thank you for your encouragement. - Chuck
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:52 PM
wow,I really like this one. Very visual. I hope it scores BIG.
Poet Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Beautiful imagery here Kim.Love it.Best wishes.Thanks for visiting my page.
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:41 PM
Kim, love your haiku~have a nice one ;-)* PD
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful Kim.....Daisies are lovely! - oxox Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 12:29 PM
In Norway we say: TUSENFRYD (daisies)
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:05 AM
fantastic read from you. kim... winning's bets if for a contest.. love the imagery!.:) huggs! :)
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March 2, 2012 at 12:05 AM
Like Rhonda daisies are one of Favorite flowers also- so innocent and simply sweet, lovely poem Kim, and thank you for your kind words to my work also, Bren : )
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March 1, 2012 at 11:40 PM
Beautiful, Kim. Daisies are one of my favorite flowers. Blessings, Rhonda
Sivey Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Very descriptive piece here Kim. I really like this write a lot! My favorite part has to be the juxtaposition which is, "a raindrop falls" very cool line Kim! I love your poem immensely, perfect! And if for a contest it would be great for the contest. Excellent Work!!
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