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Meadow Abloom

lush green meadow
abloom with white daisies --
a raindrop falls

3/1/12 Kim Merryman
Entered in PD's "Your Own Favorite Haiku" Contest

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Carrie Richards

Date: 2/22/2013 9:30:00 AM

I love the beautiful picture this paints!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 1:28:00 AM

Hi congratulations, great haiku Kim , and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:10:00 PM

Kim,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2012 12:30:00 PM

so charming soon we will see those fields of daisies! Congrad's on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Kim. Love,Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/11/2012 5:58:00 PM

Fine write,Wonderful imagery,Kim.Congratulations on your well deserved win in Charles`s contest....

Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2012 12:32:00 PM

Very good imagery here Kim.Congrats on your big win.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/11/2012 12:16:00 PM

Congrats on your great win, Kim! I remember this one...I loved it the first time I read it. Blesiings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/11/2012 9:28:00 AM

you make my imagination twirl.. congrats to you, kim! :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/11/2012 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, a lovely piece xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2012 1:05:00 AM

congrats Kim on a wonderful win for words of perfection for Hailu contest by Charles..luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/7/2012 4:32:00 AM

Love this Kim, and depending where one resides, one needs that raindrop. harry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2012 5:11:00 AM

Great work..Enjoyed picturing the meadow from the words penned..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Ahh! My butterfly was actually yellow and I think that it was a Swallowtail which we do not see so much around here..Yellow would not fit in what I wanted to say so I used blue which is a color I enjoy...Sara

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 3/5/2012 6:34:00 PM

Such lovely images from your Haiku Kim , best wishes , Declan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2012 12:31:00 PM

Very beautiful poem, Kim. I am no haiku expert, but I know when I find a poem I love. Your imagery is wonderful, Kim. Winning wishes for you in th haiku contest! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 3/5/2012 12:19:00 PM

Nothing more pretty than a meadow in bloom Kim. Your words capture such a meadow :)

Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/5/2012 12:43:00 AM

You make it seem so easy, but I know that it takes genuine clarity to write with such elegant simplicity. And thank you for your encouragement. - Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2012 10:52:00 PM

wow,I really like this one. Very visual. I hope it scores BIG.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/3/2012 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Kim.Love it.Best wishes.Thanks for visiting my page.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 5:41:00 PM

Kim, love your haiku~have a nice one ;-)* PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2012 12:23:00 PM

Beautiful Kim.....Daisies are lovely! - oxox Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2012 12:29:00 PM

In Norway we say: TUSENFRYD (daisies)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2012 9:05:00 AM

fantastic read from you. kim... winning's bets if for a contest.. love the imagery!.:) huggs! :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 3/2/2012 12:05:00 AM

Like Rhonda daisies are one of Favorite flowers also- so innocent and simply sweet, lovely poem Kim, and thank you for your kind words to my work also, Bren : )

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/1/2012 11:40:00 PM

Beautiful, Kim. Daisies are one of my favorite flowers. Blessings, Rhonda

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/1/2012 10:12:00 PM

Very descriptive piece here Kim. I really like this write a lot! My favorite part has to be the juxtaposition which is, "a raindrop falls" very cool line Kim! I love your poem immensely, perfect! And if for a contest it would be great for the contest. Excellent Work!!

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