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Meadow - 8 Lines of Beauty

A golden meadow waves
In a breeze with messages
White daisies daintily sway
In the rising sunlight

There is music in the heart
Sparkling like the dew drops
On this shimmering path
Waiting for us to wander

Heidi Sands

6/29/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Walker Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 10:06 PM
It sounds like a beautiful summer morning, perfect for a walk. Really nice Heidi :)
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Lenna. :) Actually it is still raining here. I took that photo nearby earlier on in the Fall.
Smith Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 9:18 PM
There's definitely music in my heart and this is great :) Good luck in the contest!
Sands Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Hi Jeremy. That is great there is music in your heart! Thank you
Hamilton Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Yes indeed, 8 lines of beauty!
Sands Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Thank you John :)
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:38 PM
Absolutely stunning imagery Heidi I with I was walking through such a beautiful meadow.. but we have rain rain and more rain and I long to see the sun:-( hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Thank you Jan. I may add a photo to it, actually. I just thought of one. Yes, we have had a lot of rain here this Spring. Almost every day we get some rain, even after the sun comes out. Again today too. Hopefully more lasting sun for both of us soon. :)
Green Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Serenity is what I feel when reading this wonderful poem Heidi. 8 lines of beauty...you can say that again.
Sands Avatar
June 29, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Thank you so much Chris. Yes, serenity ! :)
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