Me Without You

Me without you, now that's a problem.
     We are like the dynamic duo Batman and Robin!

Me without you is like a spider without silk
     and cereal without milk.  Yes the leaning tower without the tilt.

Me without you is a child with no smile.  A clown with no laugh.
     Like being lost in miles of forest with no path.

Me without you is a space with no stars.  A head with no face.
     and no wheels on cars.

Me without you is shattered dreams, dethroned kings,
     and tarished diamond rings.

Me without you is a heart with no beat, legs with no feet,
     Leaves me confused and incomplete.

Me without you is simply living in an empty shell,
     and so me without you would be pure hell!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 23, 2009 at 1:28 PM
Clever poem Jimmy, it's good to have two halves that make a whole, i do hope you have yours in mind >> James
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