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Me, With Myself

when i wake for life
  l carry the young me with me
    that me i talks. walks...
  leave my aged me, in bed 
     resting in peace...

allegoryallusionappreciationextended metaphorlight verse

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Heidi Sands

October 31, 2022 at 6:35 AM

Great one Alkas. Enjoy today :)

Alkas Poetry

November 1, 2022 at 1:36 PM

tHANK YOU só MUCH, DEAR Heidi, God bless you alkas

Sara Kendrick

October 31, 2022 at 4:38 AM

Cute one. Sad that we can't do what we could do once in life. I guess we would kill ourselves doing and doing and doing. I guess aging is designed for a time of rest. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Alkas Poetry

November 1, 2022 at 1:37 PM

tHANK YOU so MUCH MY dear, God bless YOU, alkas