Yanny Widjanarko Poet Haiku

Me Versus the 4th Grader

Monsoon yet to come -------> Me
If it has come, I will die!!! --------> Audrey - 4th grader 
Poor little smell goat ---------> Me

Author Note:
I found out her verse is really innocent, peppy and a bit clueless, but still look hilarious though, so I decide to post it. She becomes addicted in Haiku since I asked her to battle with me after our lesson time was over. :p

*After the Haiku finished:

Me: Why Monsoon could make you die? (wondering)
Audrey: Because I cannot swim. (with innocent face)
Me: I thought you were afraid to shower by the rain, just like goats (she pouts)

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Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2012 at 2:36 PM what fun you had!

Sara Kendrick November 22, 2012 at 6:10 AM Interesting work by you and the child..Enjoyed reading ...Sara

Richard Lamoureux November 14, 2012 at 8:30 AM This is so cool, I would have loved a teacher like you. Yanny Widjanarko November 14, 2012 at 8:49 AM Thank you very much Richard :), pleasure to have a visit from you :) - Regards, Yanny

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2012 at 12:32 PM what brought this...on...LOL Yanny Widjanarko November 13, 2012 at 5:12 PM Maybe next time English Quintains? XD Yanny Widjanarko November 13, 2012 at 5:09 PM she's a smart kid, always thirst for new things, so rather than always just pouring a plain water in the glass of her intelligence, why not I try to mix it with syrup or maybe a lemonade instead, study also needs to be fun and fresh, doesn't it? And surprisingly she enjoyed :D

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2012 at 12:31 PM wow... I love this Yanny, you are a wonderful person,,, sharing the soup with others... especially the young ones... the innocence captures many places... always~pd