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Today I saw the woman 
who seemed missing of her smile. 
I watched her there
and we started to stare 
at each other for a while. 

I looked at her mouth 
and heard her say, 
“To thine own self be true.”
While in her eyes, 
so tired but wise, 
my every thought she knew. 

She’d felt every feeling 
and she understood my pain,
just as if she 
were a part of me,
with somehow something to gain. 

I wondered if she might go on 
with seemingly much to say, 
but matching my stare 
she just stood there,
so I guessed it would not be today.

Feeling the oddness we looked away,
then I reached for the door. 
When I turned off the light 
she had gone from my sight 
and the mirror went black once more.


~Jeannie Cronin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/2/2022 11:31:00 AM
Nice one! Well done, indeed! Aloha!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/2/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, Rico
Date: 11/2/2022 2:14:00 AM
you are reflected thyself on the mirror of life; nice to read
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/2/2022 6:29:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/2/2022 1:56:00 AM
Beautiful and meaningful write ~ enjoyed
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Date: 11/2/2022 1:58:00 AM
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