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Me Too

Today I saw the woman 
who seemed missing of her smile. 
I watched her there
and we started to stare 
at each other for a while. 

I looked at her mouth 
and heard her say, 
“To thine own self be true.”
While in her eyes, 
so tired but wise, 
my every thought she knew. 

She’d felt every feeling 
and she understood my pain,
just as if she 
were a part of me,
with somehow something to gain. 

I wondered if she might go on 
with seemingly much to say, 
but matching my stare 
she just stood there,
so I guessed it would not be today.

Feeling the oddness we looked away,
then I reached for the door. 
When I turned off the light 
she had gone from my sight 
and the mirror went black once more.


~Jeannie Cronin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Leffanta Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Nice one! Well done, indeed! Aloha!
Cronin Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 12:57 PM
Thanks, Rico
Bangalee Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:14 AM
you are reflected thyself on the mirror of life; nice to read
Cronin Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Thanks
Seeker Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 1:56 AM
Beautiful and meaningful write ~ enjoyed
Cronin Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 1:58 AM
Thanks
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