Me Time

Left him in the I.C.U.
driving home alone
looking forward to being by myself
park car & enter empty house
i don’t feel like smiling…

26/11/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Neels Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 2:43 AM
My thoughts on this one is you looking forward to time on your own but also sad about the fact that you had to leave someone behind..Just my 5 cents :) Wilma
Jakoet Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 4:43 AM
You are so right. Thank you for commenting Wilma.
Brown Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 6:45 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life Rugaya. Love, Carol
Jakoet Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Carol.
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April 27, 2012 at 3:13 PM
hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did
Jakoet Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Thank you.
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April 27, 2012 at 10:17 AM
welcme 2 soup. Look forward 2 reading mre.
Jakoet Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Thank you.
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