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Me the Dreamcatcher

<>The Dreamcatcher ~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~ Out doing what I do, Catching dreams looking Tonight I caught a few Here's one I found touching Hope you find it that way too. I felt your pain the pressure Your heart guiding your pen Express, don’t feel lesser Your words let them open Like a key to your dresser Your honesty now exposing You, your very true emotions When writing, or composing Your unrequited love, devotion His obsessiveness, imposing Making you feel your wrong Has you in a vice-like grip. Time to give him a swan song Catch him out make him trip The truth you knew all along In case you did not know I am the Dreamcatcher And before I let you go Dream, one more chapter Find a man who’ll love you so So I can catch your dream Set you free to pursue love Find a King, be his Queen A nudge, a gentle tiny shove Awake, not aware I’ve been You will feel your soul refreshed Your thoughts no longer in a mess Your heart, no more enmeshed Start looking for a wedding dress All done, dawn, time for me to rest Your beautiful sad poem inspired me To reply in verse, with my poetry Thanking you so much, hope you like it As much as I did composing and writing it. Thanks again, me the Dreamcatcher

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Date: 11/14/2017 7:37:00 AM
Dream catcher I am still waiting for my dream to come true. You must try harder until my dream comes true. A beautiful written poem. Mick have a nice dasy my friend.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/15/2017 8:04:00 AM
Haha, I'll do my best, many hugs and thanks for your kind words.... Mick
Date: 11/10/2017 8:45:00 PM
"Your words let them open Like a key to your dresser" thought those lines were interesting in particular. In short, I love it, Mick! This was an incredible poem and it's going straight to my favorites. I have a small dreamcatcher that hangs in my room from the Grand Canyon. I like the different designs. Very neat. Great one! Always, Laura
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/11/2017 3:51:00 AM
Thanks Laura, humbled I am. I've made a few my self way back when my eyes were up to, after all who I am I? The Dreamcatcher of course :) (I wish), thanks again, Mick
Date: 11/10/2017 7:11:00 PM
Whimsical, wise and hopeful. I really like the Dreamcatcher's rhythmic, soothing tone of voice. A very interesting, splendid write. Enjoyed!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 11/11/2017 3:54:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind words Bernard, truly appreciated!

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