amended 23 10 2014 omitting 'to' from 3rd line 1st stanza, and 'you' from 1st line last stanza.
I've Limricized..' Haiku Than Bauk, a time or two. In verse intent, play scenes. To prose.' not heavy of line.! My word..! 'to grasp the time' Its to do.! Today so seems.. In green of mango groves, Where marmosets flex toes Crush berry.. Daub bamboo screen, To paint a vivid show my wish for you to know.' In Balassi stanza keen.
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