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Me on Me

The rays falling on me,It is confusing; for some people, it is burning.For some, it highlights my flaws.But the perception is that, for me, the confusion of statements is just like pebbles and stones falling in or on the sea.Like the sea, the flow of me will never be burned by the rays; it just can stimulate my strength. The flaws and burning are part of a person's life. For those who are just involved in creating trauma for others, that lesson is wrong that they have learnt.

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Tom Woody

Date: 12/5/2023 5:27:00 AM

May those golden rays highlight the beauty that is you Suchita

Suchita Uniyal
Date: 12/5/2023 5:47:00 AM

Thanks for the compliment. I hope I can be that ray always.

Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 7:29:00 AM

Deeply emotive poem Suchita.. you have expressed your feelings with so much raw emotions.

Suchita Uniyal
Date: 12/5/2023 5:17:00 AM

Thankyou so much dear. Your appreciation means a lot to me.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/3/2023 6:28:00 AM

Brilliant how you’ve written in such a descriptive manner, and also the ending hits strong, i agree. Love the flow of this and what you’ve conveyed in such eloquence,i can feel strength and determination as i read “ just like pebbles and stones falling in or on the sea.Like the sea, the flow of me will never be burned by the rays; it just can stimulate my strength.“ impeccable : pleasure reading

Suchita Uniyal
Date: 12/5/2023 5:18:00 AM

Thankyou so much for this loving appreciation.