Suchita Uniyal Poet Acrostic

Me on Me

The rays falling on me,It is confusing; for some people, it is burning.For some, it highlights my flaws.But the perception is that, for me, the confusion of statements is just like pebbles and stones falling in or on the sea.Like the sea, the flow of me will never be burned by the rays; it just can stimulate my strength.
The flaws and burning are part of a person's life. For those who are just involved in creating trauma for others, that lesson is wrong that they have learnt.

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Silent One December 3, 2023 at 7:29 AM Deeply emotive poem Suchita.. you have expressed your feelings with so much raw emotions. Suchita Uniyal December 5, 2023 at 5:17 AM Thankyou so much dear. Your appreciation means a lot to me.

Ink Empress December 3, 2023 at 6:28 AM Brilliant how you’ve written in such a descriptive manner, and also the ending hits strong, i agree. Love the flow of this and what you’ve conveyed in such eloquence,i can feel strength and determination as i read “ just like pebbles and stones falling in or on the sea.Like the sea, the flow of me will never be burned by the rays; it just can stimulate my strength.“ impeccable : pleasure reading Suchita Uniyal December 5, 2023 at 5:18 AM Thankyou so much for this loving appreciation.