Me, Myself and Ice

Only the cold crunching
of the fresh snow bunching,
and the tired leather boots
as I take that first step

Can be heard right here
by no other frozen ear,
for away I rushed off
to find silence instead

And all that is harsh
exists not on this marsh,
where the only prying eyes
belong to birds and deer

The moment I did hesitate
to glide along my skate,
a winter wind whistled
tugging my scarf forward

Been years since I tried
the child in me never died,
and once you learn how
you cannot ever forget

And being scared of a fall
takes the fun from it all,
while on this solemn pond
where all worries flee

Staying sure on these feet
when blade and ice meet,
kept me on my toes as
all went spinning around

Until the colors of sunset
made the trees silhouette,
and brought back to me
a world gone miles away

Leaving not a solitary trace
of my presence at this place,
I untied those tight bindings
and took in a deep breath

A memory etched in my mind
just the figures left behind,
and if the sun erases them
I can always come back....



(January 14th, 2020)
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Chunn Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 4:34 PM
I hope "the child in me never died" also. Congratulation on your placement in the contest. A beautiful expression of your recapturing moments from childhood.
Deschler Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 5:15 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments, Andy ... I appreciate it very much :)
Caliri Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 11:22 PM
Congrats on 3rd place in my contest! Excellent economy of words. Well deserved!
Deschler Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 6:31 PM
Thank you so much, Matt :)
Scott Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 1:26 AM
Love the flow and rhyme here davidscottxx
Deschler Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Thank you, David :)
Peterson Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 8:50 PM
You speak so compellingly of skating, but more than that, you have become a new creature, born with skates instead of feet. Like winter plumage they grow every year then depart when no longer needed, only to regrow when chill prompts their appearance. How many are there like you? The Hooded Winter Skate I'll call you. My wife said, you wrote about her, skating along on Lake Erie.
Deschler Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 11:55 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem Mark... Please forgive my late reply. I haven't been spending a lot of time on Poetry Soup these days...
Theraven Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Kelly, What a nice picture you painted here. Sharpened your blades when you wrote this skate in nature's solitude 'where the only prying eyes belong to birds and deer'. Very nice to find this one. Happy Sunday. -Richard
Deschler Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Thank you Richard... Have a nice weekend :)
Macfarlane Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Wonderful poem and image of you skating around. Hugs
Deschler Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Thank you Cecilia ... hugs :)
Horsch Avatar
January 26, 2020 at 2:47 PM
I love how you looked within your mind when you wrote this one. A very good poem my friend. I really enjoyed this poem. your friend.......Roger
Deschler Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 9:05 PM
Thank you Roger :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 10:10 AM
Wonderful write Kelly, I enjoyed the freedom of the moment spent with you through the read. It's true you can always come back!
Deschler Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Thank you John :)
Callus Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 1:43 PM
This is beautiful, Kelly, and I wish we had skating rinks here in Malta where the temperature never goes down enough to produce natural ones. Like swimming, or cycling, skating is certainly something which one never forgets. ~ Warm regards // paul
Deschler Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 5:19 PM
Thank you Paul :)
Mcguire Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 3:57 PM
Great poem! I like the rhythm and the rhyme. The first two lines make me anxious for the next stanza. Well done.
Deschler Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Thanks so much Timothy... I'm really glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:59 PM
Beautiful verse, Kelly,a fav. congratulations your win. Eve
Deschler Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Thanks so much for making this poem a favorite... I'm really glad you enjoyed it Eve :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Hi Kelly I spent lots of years happily ice skating leaving behind daily life while spinning and jumping on the ice. I really resonated with this delightfully penned poem. Congratulations from one ice skater to another!
Deschler Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Thanks so much Sam... I appreciate your kind comments on this poem... I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 12:06 AM
I love this Kelly! I am putting it into my Faves. The spirit of freedom is so exquisitely felt in this lovely poem. xxoo
Deschler Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Thanks so much for making this poem a favorite... So glad you enjoyed it Connie :)
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