Me, Myself and I

O - Olive that was her first name O - Oli, eloi, bloss her other names O - Overall, any of these is acceptable O - Only she prefers most her one name L - Life come upon her by 13th of August L - Living with her grandparents first L - Learning she always want to pursue L - Ladder of life she jolly began to do I - Interested to music, books and stories I - Indefinite reading even old histories I - In the kitchen, She loves cooking I - In anywhere, She is there singing V - Victor she always strives to be V - Vices and violence against is she V - Vivaciously aiming to live life fullest V - Vigorously stepping to life's hurdles E - Each one she shares a smile E - Even though she feels bad inside E - Endearing, she was always told E - Eager to explore things untold E - Essence of a woman, she beholds E - Extremes she tries to balance and hold E - Even if skin and beauty folds E - Embroidered life by God, she is called L - Looking to be channel of blessing L - Listening before understanding L - Loaded not with a good tall L - Limitless to achieve a goal O - Onwards she always go O - On sides and on back she forgoes O - Opting not to forget all good O - Omitting not of gratitude I - In God, she always trusts I - In real love, she believes I - In singing and writings, she frees I - Into her family, she spree S - Small girl she may seem S - Smartness, she projects not hid S - Sweats she doesn't care to pour S - Sincere heart that she devours A - Adoring God, forever she will A - Acceleration she will deal A - Antidote to her woos is love A - Above all is her one living God... (c)olive_eloisa 10:57 am March 24, 2014
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Callus Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Oh yes...this is the Olive_eloi that I know!! One more thing that I would like to add is that she is always willing to give in abundance, without expecting anything in return. // Congratulations // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:50 PM
touched Paul thank you that all I can say.. :)
Allison Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 6:39 AM
beautifully crafted a well deserved winner:-) hugs jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:49 PM
hugs too Jan thanks.. :)
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Beautifully crafted acrostic. Olive. congrats on the win
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:49 PM
thanks much Dr. Ram. :) You are among the dirst who appreciatedmy poetry. :)
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August 18, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Olive, Congratulations!!! Enjoy your winning poem, I had tons of fun, going over the winning poems. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Things That Suck" Featuring Andrea's awesome title and poem, if you like. Always ~LINDA~
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 11:48 PM
thanks much Lollie Linda.. :) miss you mwah!
Vaso Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:51 PM
Beautiful, do you know any history of the name " eloise" ?
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:24 AM
I received a very short reply mail.. :D :P so i thought you got really bored.. :( :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:18 AM
thanks for dropping by, Arthur.. :_ God bless and Happy easter.. :), olive_eloi. (kindly refresh me something about one history of my name .. :D :P
Vaso Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Ops Eloisa, there is many variations of this name!
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