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Me eat my words

Let's have some fun hide the sun once and turn the time. Call moon for light day and night same no bright sun there. Who will do it? Little bit tough me eat my words. © kashinath karmakar(6th Auigust 2011) ============================= Placement: 3rd;(August 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Than-Bauk Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta

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Date: 8/13/2011 4:05:00 PM
Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:53:00 AM
WAY to go with the contest, Kash. I loved your ideas here.
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Date: 8/12/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win...Sara
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Date: 8/12/2011 3:22:00 AM
hey Kash, congrats on a great win, David
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Date: 8/11/2011 11:00:00 PM
I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 10:05:00 PM
Kashinath, swell to see your poem take a third place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:33:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your terrific third place win with new form and great poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:31:00 PM
congrats on your win Kashinath
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:12:00 PM
Awesomely creative, made me laugh too, very good and congrats on your win Kashinath.
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 6:50:00 PM
little bit, but tough enough... way to write, kashinath!
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Date: 8/11/2011 6:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, kashinath
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:29:00 PM
ey dear kashi... gimme a new one?? come visit... you okay, buddy?? :) hugs, nette
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:02:00 PM
Clever game with the sun and moon. Yes, I suppose u will be full after eating your words! I must go now to read of your fluttering butterfly! Thanks for the warm welcome, Kash! I will give this poetry form a try. It's a streeeeeetch for me! Gwendolen
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Date: 8/9/2011 8:41:00 AM
Interesting one for Dr. Ram's contest..Good luck...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:53:00 AM
Very witty..I tried and failed..thanks for the comment on mine..jo
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:39:00 PM
so playful and upbeat, kashi... winner for me! come visit..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:18:00 PM
I need to leaarn what all these different types of verses mean. Good luck in the contest Kash, your verse is light and dreamy.
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Date: 8/7/2011 3:20:00 PM
Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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Date: 8/7/2011 1:27:00 PM
An excellent take on the contest. Best wishes
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:27:00 AM
so cool Kash.. I see there is a form Than Bauk but I did not notice it in the list before..so thankxx luv..and good luck in the contest.. been trying to post mine for a while now.. no access to do so..oh.. when will this all be repaired or put back the way it was .. am so weary of it all.. now I cannot imagine life without the Sun.. since I am a sun worshipper oh..
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Date: 8/7/2011 10:45:00 AM
LOL, witty fun piece
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Date: 8/7/2011 6:30:00 AM
kashi, a light, dainty piece that bounces with such delightful phrases... winning wishes!! :) come and visit.. huggs!
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Date: 8/6/2011 11:03:00 PM
Thanks for the entry
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Date: 8/6/2011 9:16:00 PM
cute one, Kash. Why did you not want to just say I instead of me? Me eat my words. I like the idea you present of hiding the sun. I sure would enjoy turning time. For SURE!
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