Kash Poet Poet Than-Bauk

Me Eat My Words

Let's have some fun
hide the sun once
and turn the time.

Call moon for light
day and night same
no bright sun there.

Who will do it?
Little bit tough
me eat my words.





© kashinath karmakar(6th Auigust 2011)
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Placement: 3rd;(August 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar

Contest:Than-Bauk

Sponsor:Dr Ram Mehta

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Jack Horne August 13, 2011 at 4:05 PM Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2011 at 11:53 AM WAY to go with the contest, Kash. I loved your ideas here.

Sara Kendrick August 12, 2011 at 5:09 PM Congrats on your win...Sara

David Williams August 12, 2011 at 3:22 AM hey Kash, congrats on a great win, David

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2011 at 11:00 PM I am stopping by this evening to thank you for your kind comments while the soup is up and running. I will never get caught up oh well that's life right? Have a wonderful evening Kashinath. Love, Carol

John Freeman August 11, 2011 at 10:05 PM Kashinath, swell to see your poem take a third place, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 11, 2011 at 7:33 PM Congrats Kash on your terrific third place win with new form and great poetry my friend..luv..

Robert A. Dufresne August 11, 2011 at 7:31 PM congrats on your win Kashinath

Tim B August 11, 2011 at 7:12 PM Awesomely creative, made me laugh too, very good and congrats on your win Kashinath.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 11, 2011 at 7:04 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Than-Bauk" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

Nancy Jones August 11, 2011 at 6:50 PM little bit, but tough enough... way to write, kashinath!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 11, 2011 at 6:24 PM Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, kashinath

Nette Onclaud August 9, 2011 at 2:29 PM ey dear kashi... gimme a new one?? come visit... you okay, buddy?? :) hugs, nette

Gwendolen Song August 9, 2011 at 2:02 PM Clever game with the sun and moon. Yes, I suppose u will be full after eating your words! I must go now to read of your fluttering butterfly! Thanks for the warm welcome, Kash! I will give this poetry form a try. It's a streeeeeetch for me! Gwendolen

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2011 at 8:41 AM Interesting one for Dr. Ram's contest..Good luck...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Juanita Warden August 9, 2011 at 1:53 AM Very witty..I tried and failed..thanks for the comment on mine..jo

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 11:39 PM so playful and upbeat, kashi... winner for me! come visit..:) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley August 7, 2011 at 11:18 PM I need to leaarn what all these different types of verses mean. Good luck in the contest Kash, your verse is light and dreamy.

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2011 at 3:20 PM Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

Joseph Osita August 7, 2011 at 1:27 PM An excellent take on the contest. Best wishes

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 11:27 AM so cool Kash.. I see there is a form Than Bauk but I did not notice it in the list before..so thankxx luv..and good luck in the contest.. been trying to post mine for a while now.. no access to do so..oh.. when will this all be repaired or put back the way it was .. am so weary of it all.. now I cannot imagine life without the Sun.. since I am a sun worshipper oh..

Jack Horne August 7, 2011 at 10:45 AM LOL, witty fun piece

Nette Onclaud August 7, 2011 at 6:30 AM kashi, a light, dainty piece that bounces with such delightful phrases... winning wishes!! :) come and visit.. huggs!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 6, 2011 at 11:03 PM Thanks for the entry

Andrea Dietrich August 6, 2011 at 9:16 PM cute one, Kash. Why did you not want to just say I instead of me? Me eat my words. I like the idea you present of hiding the sun. I sure would enjoy turning time. For SURE!

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