Me Crazy She Insane

I cultivate chickens
in the yard she
lives with leopards
in the garden...
I feed
pigeons in the parks,
she caresses rockets
by the sea ...
I visit the flea theater
 she is eager to
look at beasts in the arena ...
I just intend
carry me to the movies ...
 she desires to film
in Hollywood ...
I always ride my
used bike ...
she is preparing
a tour
to Aldebaran or
Mars ... I am not sure
if I stay here, or construct a place,
 another further place...!
She merely is
changing to other galaxy ...
i am crazy and she is insane,
how do we do to
harmonize,!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Connelly Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 10:43 PM
OH YEAH Alkas!!! A crazy person never knows they are, but your wonderful comparison of "crazy" and "insane" makes all the difference. So beautifully written. I'm loco; she's loca.
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August 12, 2019 at 10:25 PM
Alkas you may never read this, but I think this poem is truly, how can I express? I read and my eyes eat it as if manna from heaven. I don't know how to save and "favorite" a poem, but I will come back to this one time and time again. BRILLIANT Alkas!!! truly
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:44 PM
hmm, sounds like my hubbie and ME, only he is the one from outer space!! I sure enjoyed this one.
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August 10, 2019 at 4:39 AM
YES QUITE INSANE BUT I SURELY MEANT TO BE FUNNY, LIKE TARZAN AND JANE JA JAJA MODERN... THANK YOU DEAR FOR COMMENTING, SALUTE ALKAS
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Opposites do attract each giving to the other interesting different ways of looking at things. My husband is pretty much completely my opposite somehow we make a go of it. Probably because we both let each other be who we are. I enjoyed this look at reality Alkas. Wonderfully penned! : )
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August 10, 2019 at 4:42 AM
I am very glad that you see things this way...thanks for your lovely comment dear Connie, saluta alkas
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