Me and You

The clarity crystal
The fear inside deep concealed
The little courage gathered and enhanced by company to seem just sufficient,
Or did u but forget my plead moments ago
 That you abhor me not for my completion,
A battle well fought
The defense so spiteful
The offense so tactical
Or did you but forget my advice moments ago
 That the unsurpassed defense is by offense,
Fooled me to your echelon of idiocy
But of course you beat me on experience
Hadn’t l ever argued with you fool,
Or did l but overlook my own advice
 That ‘never argue with a fool...........’
It seems l beat you in your own game
A dose of your own medicine per say
Delivered with precision, due care and professionalism,
Or did you but forget that "an archer without an arrow........
Had u consulted me before you mouthed 
Mouthed and even chewed what u can’t swallow
Am remorseful if l hurt you because I never meant to 
Just a tender but rigorous lesson
A little painful but more of unforgettable,
l now tell u hoping that u won’t but forget
 "A fool dies by his own bow n arrow"
I hope that’s not what you are
 And that "a wise man beats his rivals by their own bows and arrows"
 That will be me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/9/2011 11:13:00 PM
amazing:)
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Date: 4/23/2011 10:40:00 PM
what a wonderful way of force... had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
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