Me and Ourself

I’m living inside you, but you don’t know me, 
Your faint insurgency mind beget me gradually.
Every morning you and me drinking a cup of tea
You like too much sugar, but I don’t like it totally. 
As you are getting more and more timid and weak, 
And slowly I’m getting more and more stronger. 
You didn’t face this world and became a stranger
You cried alone and wanted to remove the dark quick.
 
Your inability generated me with inseparable soul and body,
You lost your love, your hopes and saw chaos in every heart,
Deception broke your heart and made you like shoddy,
You became weaker and I was written in your chart.

You are now strong and invincible, but not alone
I’m always sitting in your beautiful heart of the salon.

Tullamore,Ireland
07/02/3015
05:15 AM.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/19/2016 12:55:00 AM
Moniruzzaman, I was reading your comments below... Thank you for the reply to my old comment. LINDA
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Date: 3/5/2016 6:04:00 PM
you most welcome Linda...
Date: 2/18/2016 1:19:00 PM
Moniruzzaman Shuvro, this is a deep write. LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 4:29:00 PM
thank you so much LINDA... hugs // ...
Date: 2/7/2016 2:01:00 PM
- Deep metaphoric write - well done, Moniruzzaman - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:05:00 PM
thank you so much Anne:) hugs for you //
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