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Me and My Sister

me and my sister look similar really but that is where the mirror image ends we are different in all ways I am messy and she is so neat she is conservative and I am lace I like everything old and she likes new we both like cats but her not as much she dislikes make up but I fancy it love my long hair she does not cooking is for her a real joy poetry writing is my thing she likes to go on trips I like it at home two sisters united in love ______________________________ July 10, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Me and My Sister Copyright Protected, ID 15-688-119-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
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Alltraine Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 3:34 AM
Brilliant poem! Well written and very clever! I love your manipulation of words and structure!
Clark Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Wonderful Broken Wings - an excellent comparative, tight well written verse! keep up that wonderful talent you have dear sis in Christ Jesus - love Susan!
Guzzi Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:10 PM
So Nice to read your verse this evening a very special one too! Light & Love
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Broken Wings, soft and vulnerable!!!! I have sisters too.. !sweet!~Olive ELoisa =")
Y. Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Wow! BW, l loved this penn of love. It reminds me of and my sister, different as night and day but for ever bonded in love. I enjoyed the form as well it had a nice flow to it. Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis(7)
Cw Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:08 PM
WOW!! Sounds like my sister and I, also sounds like a big, big winner B.W. A 7 and a FAV.... hugs Theresa
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:30 AM
- A lovely poem, B.W. .... sounds like my sister and me :))) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 3:27 AM
simply charming - I love the form you have used - I will say NOTHING about my mercenary sister :-( hugs Jan xx Good luck in the contest this will do well I am sure 7
Carter Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Sweet : )
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