Me and My Sister


me
and my
sister look
similar really
but that is where
the mirror image ends
we are different in all ways
I am messy and she is so neat
she is conservative and I am lace
I like everything old and she likes new

we both like cats but her not as much
she dislikes make up but I fancy it
love my long hair she does not
cooking is for her a real joy
poetry writing is my thing
she likes to go on trips
I like it at home
two sisters
united in
love


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July 10, 2015

Poetry/Verse/Me and My Sister
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P.I. Alltraine

Date: 7/29/2015 3:34:00 AM

Brilliant poem! Well written and very clever! I love your manipulation of words and structure!

Susan Clark

Date: 7/22/2015 9:39:00 AM

Wonderful Broken Wings - an excellent comparative, tight well written verse! keep up that wonderful talent you have dear sis in Christ Jesus - love Susan!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/19/2015 8:10:00 PM

So Nice to read your verse this evening a very special one too! Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/12/2015 8:25:00 AM

Broken Wings, soft and vulnerable!!!! I have sisters too.. !sweet!~Olive ELoisa =")

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/11/2015 5:28:00 PM

Wow! BW, l loved this penn of love. It reminds me of and my sister, different as night and day but for ever bonded in love. I enjoyed the form as well it had a nice flow to it. Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis(7)

Theresa Cw

Date: 7/11/2015 1:08:00 PM

WOW!! Sounds like my sister and I, also sounds like a big, big winner B.W. A 7 and a FAV.... hugs Theresa

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2015 6:30:00 AM

- A lovely poem, B.W. .... sounds like my sister and me :))) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/11/2015 3:27:00 AM

simply charming - I love the form you have used - I will say NOTHING about my mercenary sister :-( hugs Jan xx Good luck in the contest this will do well I am sure 7

Lee Carter

Date: 7/11/2015 12:48:00 AM

Sweet : )