Me and My Sister

i mind when i was wee
playing games with my sister

we kept each other free
me and my sister

we loved with all our hearts
protecting each sister

even after having kids
joined each sister

Combining all these things
playing all the games
loving with our hearts
loving each others kids

We are glued, me and my sister!!

                By Kate Mcnaughton.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/30/2016 11:22:00 AM
kate,, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:38:00 PM
lovely poem about you and your sister. - JH
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Kate Mcnaughton
Date: 6/21/2012 2:23:00 AM
Thankyou so much J.H.
Date: 12/10/2011 6:18:00 AM
Hi Kate, I'm sorry I didn't reply, but I totally forgot about this account! Also, I can't see any private message fucntion - so I have to comment here. I like to think of Rachel as a wave of memory coming in and out of the narrators life. Thanks very much for your kind comments. And this is a very beautiful ode to your sister!
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:09:00 AM
Siblings so close is wonderful to read about Kate, and told so lovely through your words :)
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Date: 9/8/2011 8:33:00 PM
This is a lovely poem Kate. I really enjoyed it! ~Michelle~ xo
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Kate Mcnaughton
Date: 9/10/2011 7:11:00 AM
thankyou Michelle, there is only 13 months between us, we are very close! glad you enjoyed it. x
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