Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Me and My Allergies

cat walks by
sneeze sneeze cough couch
rubbing my red eyes now
throat is starting to close up
sneeze sneeze cough cough 

a smoker’s car
uncontrollable sneezinig and coughing
I can barely breathe
I am wheezing now
sneeze sneeze cough cough 

Elderly aunt all dressed in pink
Walks toward me for an embrace
As she gets closer I begin backing away
I am in full blown coughing mode now
Wheezling and sneezing

My throat closes up,
I will take that allergy pill now I think
Right before I pass out 
Due to her wearing enough perfume
To asphyxiate all the girls in a French whore house
Cough Cough Sneeze Sneeze Wheeze Wheeze

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Maurice Rigoler June 21, 2020 at 2:37 PM I never suffered wfrom allergies when young. But after entering my 70s I began to have them, from natural sources (pollen etc) and also cheap perfumes many women wear (or do they bath in it?) So far they aren't severe enough that I require a doctor or medication. / Maurice

Mahtab Bangalee June 21, 2020 at 5:05 AM full of thorny allergies....... Caren Krutsinger June 21, 2020 at 9:31 PM They are no fun!

Lindsay Laurie June 21, 2020 at 12:03 AM Hello Caren … seems to be so much more allergy problems. Being stung by a bee and touching prawn shells makes life uncomfortable. I did enjoy the message in your poem Caren - Lindsay Caren Krutsinger June 21, 2020 at 9:31 PM Thank you very much Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues June 20, 2020 at 9:23 PM Oh, feel better, girl! Caren Krutsinger June 21, 2020 at 9:32 PM I have been sneezing lately; glad it is ONLY allergies Kim.