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Me and My Allergies

cat walks by sneeze sneeze cough couch rubbing my red eyes now throat is starting to close up sneeze sneeze cough cough a smoker’s car uncontrollable sneezinig and coughing I can barely breathe I am wheezing now sneeze sneeze cough cough Elderly aunt all dressed in pink Walks toward me for an embrace As she gets closer I begin backing away I am in full blown coughing mode now Wheezling and sneezing My throat closes up, I will take that allergy pill now I think Right before I pass out Due to her wearing enough perfume To asphyxiate all the girls in a French whore house Cough Cough Sneeze Sneeze Wheeze Wheeze

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Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/21/2020 2:37:00 PM

I never suffered wfrom allergies when young. But after entering my 70s I began to have them, from natural sources (pollen etc) and also cheap perfumes many women wear (or do they bath in it?) So far they aren't severe enough that I require a doctor or medication. / Maurice

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/21/2020 5:05:00 AM

full of thorny allergies.......

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/21/2020 9:31:00 PM

They are no fun!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/21/2020 12:03:00 AM

Hello Caren … seems to be so much more allergy problems. Being stung by a bee and touching prawn shells makes life uncomfortable. I did enjoy the message in your poem Caren - Lindsay

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/21/2020 9:31:00 PM

Thank you very much Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2020 9:23:00 PM

Oh, feel better, girl!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/21/2020 9:32:00 PM

I have been sneezing lately; glad it is ONLY allergies Kim.