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Me and Me

A selfish yes An unkind no Blind eye to pain Deaf to insane. Pray how does one retrace for to find that forgotten face to touch that trembling hand the soft unheard to hear the blank unseen to see. Pray how does one unchain a lifetime of links serpentine... I hooked to me me addicted to I I for me and me for me. All the ways and all the days all of the all of everything that always be just for me.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/20/2023 12:52:00 PM

Your "Me and Me" is a creative write. I wish you would write more. Have a fun day writing away..................

Sarah Ann Jullion
Date: 4/21/2023 10:26:00 AM

Hi Paula, and thank you for your comment. :} Greatly appreciated. Posting more today... I have quite a stash.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/20/2023 11:06:00 AM

A fine piece excellently penned Sarah, bringing out an unique style of writing. Welcome to PS and trust you'll enjoy it here meeting plenty of new friends, blessings,Gordon

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/20/2023 4:48:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on "me and I" through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2023 10:40:00 PM

What's important is #1 and should always be that way. I felt that way for most of my life, selfish & arrogant. In a way I am still arrogant, confident but my selfishness has dwindled. I am now the father of two beautiful young girls. I cannot be that way any longer. I feel this write. Welcome to the soup and I have no doubt you'll fit in well here. Much love Asavvy1

Sarah Ann Jullion
Date: 2/23/2023 7:55:00 PM

A belated response Jared... thank you for your read and for taking time to comment. I agree with you about children. They push one past the myoptic lense. You are fortunate! Children are a blessing.