Me

A different breath,
A different word.
A whole new meaning,
To one outburst.
A new reaction,
A new thought.
To every detailed story,
That you just bought.
A change in opinion,
A change in mind.
thought you knew someone,
but realised you were blind.

30-01-2006
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 7:35 PM
A belated welcome to the soup. This was an excellent first offering.
Kimathi Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Congrats Hayley, for having your poem freatured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
Yuan Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Congrats. I like your poem
Smith Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Welcome to our community Hayley. Congrats. on your featured honor...
Dalei Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Hayley, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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May 15, 2016 at 12:28 PM
ha good one..... SKAT
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 3:59 AM
A warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. I enjoyed your first post here. Your poem gave me pause to read it a few times and I liked it better with each read! I look forward to reading more of your poetry Haley. Aloha, Connie : ) #7
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