Me

My body is full of chasms   
Lumps and abnormalities 
Big and round in the middle 
Nothing wrong with a dimple 
It is simple 
Yes sure I have a wrinkle 
My toes are curled 
It's Different around the world 
I'm like a diamond coated pearled 
Skin is fair 
Look if you dare 
I am all open and bare 
Cheeks are red 
I'm not a purebred 
Enough is said 
My lips are small 
I'm not tall 
Yes I have an eyeball
Not one but two 
They are both blue 
It's true 
My butt is white 
I will keep it out of sight 
It just doesn't seem so right 
I'm 5"6 I can't do trix 
Or even lavishing flips 
I love to take trips 
My bosoms are like a floppy disc 
There is much to risk
On on them there is extra misc 
Yes my **** are pink 
So what I did not ask about your dink 
So let it sink 
Next is my face 
This isn't a race 
Slow down and pace 
It's round 
It does make sound 
It even got an extra mound 
My hair is gold 
Not that old 
It can never be sold
Yes my body is large 
It may even have a jumping barge 
I can even take it on turbocharge 
I got extra cracks 
Where you could hide your snacks 
And you can see my tracks 
I have curves 
Just look at my swerves 
Fall into my words 
I got dots feckless and spots 
Scars and stars 
But that's okay that's me and that's all you will see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/19/2016 7:31:00 PM
Hi Reny, just like to drop by people's first write and read from there because sometimes you can catch real gems. To me every poem is a gem because each one comes from a persons soul. Well it is nice to meet the me that is you. An excellent first write letting everyone know who you are. I love the honesty. I have a spare tyre myself aroud my mdriff....Mike.
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:20:00 AM
Reny Jameel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Reny Jameel
Date: 3/30/2016 2:11:00 AM
thanks very much for all ur comments:)
Date: 3/23/2016 10:34:00 AM
Reny, well expressed, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Reny Jameel
Date: 3/30/2016 2:12:00 AM
thank you
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