Me

It's my first day of school I know what to wear It's something amazing Something with flare I wear my green flat shoes And my polka dotted tights My red and purple hula skirt That has forty flashing lights I wear my striped t-shirt With a picture of a clown I wear my golden shoulder pads And a belt from out of town I wear my purple sweater And my diamond necklace too I know that i stand out Cause' I don't look just like you

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/1/2014 1:27:00 AM

This is so very cute :)

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 4/15/2014 8:52:00 PM

That's a clever poem with nice flow to it!

Michael Miers

Date: 3/4/2014 5:31:00 PM

love it.

Chayil Hyland
Date: 3/15/2014 6:17:00 PM

Thank you Michael!!!!!

Rob Carter

Date: 3/1/2014 5:42:00 PM

Reminds me how schools by me try to crush individuality with uniforms. I bet my kids would want that freedom to express themselves - but they can't! Good rhyme- just looked at your previous one too. V. good.

Chayil Hyland
Date: 3/15/2014 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Rob, but you can still express yourself even with uniform. Nothing can stop you from being yourself!!!!