Me

They call me,
caring me into long days, 
mysterious nights.
The green decreases and the sand flow in,
thirsty.

I have made life easy,
Invented, discovered, destroyed,
killed, created …except life.

I have flown in clouds,
of dreams and love.
Sometimes I am a vagabond, beg for a drop,
Sometimes I realize sometimes forget.
Sometimes wasted, sometime used.

Yes its me, sometimes wasted, 
sometimes used.
Today when I collect fragments of my past,
I have time no more.

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User Name: Bidhu Patnaik
Form: Free Verse
Reason: It is a poem of my self discovery, This poem was inspired by a turning point in my life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Taylor Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Way to go, Bidhu. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
Patnaik Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 1:16 AM
Thank you so much Ralph.
A  Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Bidhu, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Patnaik Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 5:04 AM
Thank you so much SKAT
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Bidhu
Patnaik Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 5:01 AM
Thank you so much Sir.
Davis Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 10:42 PM
Powerful and very deep. Lots of emotion running through this poem. Congrats on your win. I also placed with my poem "children" nice job
Patnaik Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 5:01 AM
Thank you so much Robin.
A   Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:51 PM
Bidhu,, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
Patnaik Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 4:59 AM
Thank you so much Linda.
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:50 AM
very sentimental write, Bidhu
Patnaik Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:53 AM
Thank you so much Sir
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