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They call me, caring me into long days, mysterious nights. The green decreases and the sand flow in, thirsty. I have made life easy, Invented, discovered, destroyed, killed, created …except life. I have flown in clouds, of dreams and love. Sometimes I am a vagabond, beg for a drop, Sometimes I realize sometimes forget. Sometimes wasted, sometime used. Yes its me, sometimes wasted, sometimes used. Today when I collect fragments of my past, I have time no more. ................................... User Name: Bidhu Patnaik Form: Free Verse Reason: It is a poem of my self discovery, This poem was inspired by a turning point in my life.

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Date: 9/29/2013 12:30:00 PM
Way to go, Bidhu. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 9/30/2013 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Ralph.
Date: 9/28/2013 2:47:00 PM
Bidhu, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 9/29/2013 5:04:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT
Date: 9/28/2013 5:36:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Bidhu
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 9/29/2013 5:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir.
Date: 9/27/2013 10:42:00 PM
Powerful and very deep. Lots of emotion running through this poem. Congrats on your win. I also placed with my poem "children" nice job
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 9/29/2013 5:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Robin.
Date: 9/27/2013 7:51:00 PM
Bidhu,, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 9/29/2013 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda.
Date: 9/21/2013 8:50:00 AM
very sentimental write, Bidhu
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 9/21/2013 8:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Sir