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I’m a girl, yet the name I won’t tell here’s a story that will ring a bell this is not one that will surely sell nor is it one with a sad farewell I have a friend who is so innocent and sweet tell her you like her, she will definitely fleet for her, a cotton candy is one hell of a treat but don’t be fooled, she’s never far from the word elite. Despite her attitude, grace and personality She lacks one little detail we call maturity Her aura is no doubt an indication of purity One look and you will sense complete tranquility Enough of all the praises, this girl is full of sadness she’s got everything, but haven’t found true happiness I tried everything just to ease her loneliness Still, I can’t find anything to fill her emptiness Princess-like life, hers is an epitome With a prince charming who is her enemy, How sad could this be? Why can’t anybody see? That this lonely friend of mine is ME.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/28/2013 6:44:00 PM
Congrats, Iona. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 2/27/2013 12:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Xao Tian
Date: 2/27/2013 7:53:00 PM
thank you sir david..
Date: 2/26/2013 8:54:00 PM
Jona.. CONGRATULATIONS, with this awesome poem about YOU :-) LINDA
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Date: 2/27/2013 7:55:00 PM
thank you madam linda..
Date: 2/26/2013 6:22:00 AM
well written, keep em coming
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Xao Tian
Date: 2/27/2013 7:56:00 PM
thank you sir!

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