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The form you see the eyes, the nose, the breast, the teeth may not be what you like eyes too dark, nose too big, breast not perky, teeth not white the form you see is it me is there not more to me than just the form you see maybe that is all of me just the form that you see why try to change keep changing the form that you see bigger breast, whiter teeth, slender figure if there was more to me than why oh why try to change the form you see?

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Date: 8/20/2010 4:31:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nicole. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:28:00 PM
Nice Nicole, enjoyed the way you point out things about reality, to ones person satisfaction. It is sad how we are never to perfect for the ones we see,, well done on the thoughts nicely spoken,..p.d.
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Date: 8/19/2010 2:36:00 AM
Wow, this is awesome Nicole.. Valid question, so love the 2 last lines.. Welcome to the Soup as well.. BB Wilma
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Date: 8/18/2010 2:25:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
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