Me

there is a me i dont want you to see between the lines i want you to read a part of me that really needs a life with you to succeed

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Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 8:03:00 PM

I think we all hide behind a mask of the real us sometimes. There are emotions and pain inside of me that I never show to others. I put on a smile around friends and keep my problems to myself except from a very tight and closed inner circle. I really like this.

Destiny Orschell

Date: 4/25/2010 6:42:00 PM

Sheila, I love the poem its...its kinda sad yes...but its beautiful, sweet, and just amazing. Keep up the good work and keep writing.

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 6:08:00 PM

Enjoyed the bio on your self,,Irma